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@plethora
KnowP
Plethora
10 lines
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Due within 24hrs
Kill yourself
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Good luck
Not really
@plethora
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i won BG, yet u put boston in the contenders match
gave joe a Shot On The Spot i earned.. now im green lighting ur ass
fuck ur ancestors & origins. that place a straight dump
beat shit out this Guyana hope he goes back where he came from
maim ur parents & brother, then stack the bodies high
gonna see black on black on black like a tricked out ride
burn cross on ur frontyard kkk style, til ur wife deceased
once i set fire to Yolanda whole town'll see her covered in white sheets
if u borrow money & its not returned, im gettin a tight rope
hang a Billowing black man like the superbowl half time show
Can I get that ext? I'll drop in the morning.
@Codealt can u close this. He aint showing
@plethora I can drop Monday if you cool with it. If not, I'll open it for feedback and give you the win. Let me know. Just been working and didn't have time.
a punch to the cranium n its over, tombstone with ya name it
pawn ya personal jewelry cause you wont need nothing engraved homie
you battlin a champ, the proof is in the puddin
they'll find u balled up in a basket like you was training with John Wooden
drop the glock n grab the sword, slice you into smores
forget having the guts to face me, worry about keeping them off the floor
ya daughters a whore, several times ive slapped that fat cat
little Jan was a sport... soo i came unglued all over her backpack
u wack scrap, uve beaten no one that deserves a mention
last time u was noticed for causin a scene, u landed a week in detention
fuck ur ancestors & origins. that place a straight dump
beat shit out this Guyana hope he goes back where he came from
maim ur parents & brother, then stack the bodies high
gonna see black on black on black like a tricked out ride
burn cross on ur frontyard kkk style, til ur wife deceased
once i set fire to Yolanda whole town'll see her covered in white sheets
nice play on that ^
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a punch to the cranium n its over, tombstone with ya name (on) it
pawn ya personal jewelry cause you wont need nothing engraved homie
you battlin a champ, the proof is in the puddin
they'll find u balled up in a basket like you was training with John Wooden
naaah.. u could've did that better.. nice reach.
drop the glock n grab the sword, slice you into smores
forget having the guts to face me, worry about keeping them off the floor
u wack scrap, uve beaten no one that deserves a mention
last time u was noticed for causin a scene, u landed a week in detention
V.KP for the better verse overall. His punches just more solid and he landed more.
I like that KKK - Yolanda line though.. and that Guyana
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Plethora
i won BG, yet u put boston in the contenders match
gave joe a Shot On The Spot i earned.. now im green lighting ur ass
Soft personal
fuck ur ancestors & origins. that place a straight dump
beat shit out this Guyana hope he goes back where he came from
Seen guyana wp before but the flip was soft man i felt it couldve been more creative according to the fact it was a wordplay
maim ur parents & brother, then stack the bodies high
gonna see black on black on black like a tricked out ride
Weak metaphore
burn cross on ur frontyard kkk style, til ur wife deceased
once i set fire to Yolanda whole town'll see her covered in white sheets
Wp little reach yoll not yall but i dig the attempt it was a good concept
if u borrow money & its not returned, im gettin a tight rope
hang a Billowing black man like the superbowl half time show
Nah
P
a punch to the cranium n its over, tombstone with ya name it
pawn ya personal jewelry cause you wont need nothing engraved homie
I like the direction of the finish but ending the rhyme scheme with homie was so fucking basic it just covered up.all potential of an impactable bar
you battlin a champ, the proof is in the puddin
they'll find u balled up in a basket like you was training with John Wooden
Wording off on finish
drop the glock n grab the sword, slice you into smores
forget having the guts to face me, worry about keeping them off the floor
Setup corny lol finisher was a dope ass flip
ya daughters a whore, several times ive slapped that fat cat
little Jan was a sport... soo i came unglued all over her backpack
Had potential but i didnt like the direction of finisher
u wack scrap, uve beaten no one that deserves a mention
last time u was noticed for causin a scene, u landed a week in detention
Ok
P better attempts but ur wording fucked ya in areas. Plethora very rushed misses. Attempts at wp but Guyana was weak and Yolanda slight reach.
V/KnowP like i said overall better attempts
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2-0 kp uppin
Plethora-
I won BG, yet u put boston in the contenders match
gave joe a Shot On The Spot i earned.. now im green lighting ur ass
...decent...
fuck ur ancestors & origins. that place a straight dump
beat shit out this Guyana hope he goes back where he came from
...cool wordplay...
maim ur parents & brother, then stack the bodies high
gonna see black on black on black like a tricked out ride
...eh alright...
burn cross on ur frontyard kkk style, til ur wife deceased
once i set fire to Yolanda whole town'll see her covered in white sheets
...nice attempt..wording was off though...
if u borrow money & its not returned, im gettin a tight rope
hang a Billowing black man like the superbowl half time show
...meh..
Vs.
Knowp-
a punch to the cranium n its over, tombstone with ya name it
pawn ya personal jewelry cause you wont need nothing engraved homie
...decent...
you battlin a champ, the proof is in the puddin
they'll find u balled up in a basket like you was training with John Wooden
..ok...
drop the glock n grab the sword, slice you into smores
forget having the guts to face me, worry about keeping them off the floor
...cool...
ya daughters a whore, several times ive slapped that fat cat
little Jan was a sport... soo i came unglued all over her backpack
...meh ok...
u wack scrap, uve beaten no one that deserves a mention
last time u was noticed for causin a scene, u landed a week in detention
....decent...
Ok well Knowp this isn't the best I've seen from you but you still had some ok bars. Plethora you had one good bar and the rest were just ok. Seems like you both lacked effort or maybe its just me. Overall I think plethora was a bit more creative and had better wordplay.
V/plethora
Plethora
I won BG, yet u put boston in the contenders match
gave joe a Shot On The Spot i earned.. now im green lighting ur ass
Ok opener.
fuck ur ancestors & origins. that place a straight dump
beat shit out this Guyana hope he goes back where he came from
Alright, seems like an easy jab.
maim ur parents & brother, then stack the bodies high
gonna see black on black on black like a tricked out ride
Good concept, not executed well.
burn cross on ur frontyard kkk style, til ur wife deceased
once i set fire to Yolanda whole town'll see her covered in white sheets
again concept was strong, execution was off.
if u borrow money & its not returned, im gettin a tight rope
hang a Billowing black man like the superbowl half time show
Missed.
KnowP
a punch to the cranium n its over, tombstone with ya name it
pawn ya personal jewelry cause you wont need nothing engraved homie
Forced.
you battlin a champ, the proof is in the puddin
they'll find u balled up in a basket like you was training with John Wooden
Decent.
drop the glock n grab the sword, slice you into smores
forget having the guts to face me, worry about keeping them off the floor
Nice enough.
ya daughters a whore, several times ive slapped that fat cat
little Jan was a sport... soo i came unglued all over her backpack
Seems forced.
u wack scrap, uve beaten no one that deserves a mention
last time u was noticed for causin a scene, u landed a week in detention
This is a low effort jab.
MVGT - plethora
Reason - plethora took this souly on creativity and had the better concepts and more personals. KnowP had some decent concepts but some felt more forced than plethora.
2-2 uppin lets gets more votes
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